Monster project thing

So a couple quarters back, I decided to do something with a design I had since I started school.  To spare you unnecessary detail, it was about three monsters being taught how to be scary.  This was the redesign I had done for the first character, Jacque.

Back a quarter or two, I wanted to do a board and possibly work more on the idea.  I didn't like the design so I had sketched out another look for the characters.

Ended up with the flash sketch that I started working on finishing.

A couple days ago, I looked back and didn't like where it was going.  So I decided to draw out another look.

I'm not sure if it would work at all in Flash, I think going back and fixing the story in general would help more than just redesigning the characters first.  I'll post up the boards for the first scene when I find them again..